You are moving to a new country, write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house.
In your letter, describe:
• yourself and your family
• which area you would like to live in
• and what facilities you need in the house
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to avail your services for renting accommodation as I will be moving to Singapore next month. Let me explain in detail.
My name is Saud and I work as a Solution architect with "ABC consulting" in India and my family consists of my wife who is presently working as a sourcing consultant. Since my employer has been awarded a project with a bank in Singapore hence I have been asked to relocate to Singapore, therefore, we would need a two-bedroom accommodation. Although I have shortlisted many posh localities in the city centre however I would like to live at the outskirts of the city in areas like woodlands as the rents are much cheaper.
Lastly, the apartment we are looking to rent should be located inside a gated society with 24 hours security and modern amenities like swimming pool, gymnasium and a club. Additionally, the condominium should have a pick and drop facility from the nearest subway station as it will address our commutation problems.
looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to avail your ...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'two-bedroom accommodation'.
Suggestion: two-bedroom accommodation
... to Singapore, therefore, we would need a two-bedroom accommodation. Although I have shortlisted many posh ...
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Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itionally, the condominium should have a pick and drop facility from the nearest ...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...will address our commutation problems. looking forward to your response. Yours sincer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, lastly, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01159795162 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9653856107 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151032338701 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612199751497 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470231550999 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854800187529 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310641349407 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.