Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take

Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I have received your letter complaining about the noise from my apartment. As you are aware that I have moved in last month, therefore, there are some major repairs going inside my house. Firstly the water leakage from the taps has caused seepage on the walls additionally there was a need for ventilation hole in the kitchen as it was very suffocating. Although for all these repairs I had taken prior consent from the Residents Welfare Society.

Furthermore, I would like to apologize as I can understand the noise coming from my flat can be irritating for adolescents and elderly parents who cannot concentrate on their work. I hope you can understand that it was never my intent to disturb you guys.

Lastly, I have taken a note of your complaint and would instruct my labour to carry out noisy works in the day and minor repair in the evening so that you folks are not disturbed in the evening while sleeping.
I look forward to your support and cooperation for the next few days.
Regards
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I have received...
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the kitchen as it was very suffocating. Although for all these repairs I had taken prior...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent from the Residents Welfare Society. Furthermore, I would like to apologize a...
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Line 6, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isturbed in the evening while sleeping. I look forward to your support and coope...
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Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eration for the next few days. Regards Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, so, therefore, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70652173913 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54292078618 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2697270609 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269098632807 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103407930729 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107976388033 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149959920156 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511579729865 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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