The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Corporation which needs to achieve a collective goal whether, competition encourage human to achieve an individual goal. Both are valuable for make a desire target. But, a good leadership needs cooperation among a particular group of people by instilling a sense of cooperation which is more important.
Competition among the young children is natural, which is internal of every human being and any human cannot ignore these. But, if human emphasizes that awful tendency he or she will not able to achieve several significant targets. Bill gates established Microsoft not only along but also with the help of a group of people. Although idea is more essential that he developed but without collaboration and effort of group member Microsoft could not achieve newer invention and idea.
Some people expressed that, competition is essential to encourage a human like sports. But, life is more beyond that and finally is not counted who win and who fail. Take for instance many team works for NASA, if among these group member has a computational tendency and tendency to prove superior the whole project will be jeopardized. Also for computational tendency might be conflict among the team member. Cooperation leads a person to gain more innovative ideas and by sharing ideas anyone can increase knowledge.
It is not true that human cannot achieve individually but for good leadership in any field most essential to be cooperative. Suppose, you are a director of a company and you are working in a project. Is it possible to successfully complete the project without help of other employee of the office? It might be possible but you have to work arduously. Whereas cooperation will help you achieve anything spontaneously.
Finally it can be conclude that, for better leadership in any field young generation should be emphasize on the sense of instilling in cooperation. That’s why, people said, “Alone we can do little; together we can earn so much”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.203125 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94685843049 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5464479174 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6315789474 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154905900501 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467649943434 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639061970022 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908276177574 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500866885525 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.