Write a letter to your friend with whom you spent a weekend participating party regarding his relocation to new house. In the letter, you should:
- Describe what you liked the most at their new apartment
- Why did you like the weekend
- When and where do you want to meet them again
Dear John,
I hope your are doing well. Thank you so much for the great weekend. I really enjoyed myself during the two day I spent at your new place.
New flat is really well furnished with the nice interior and vibrant colors. On top of that, the society is quite neat and well managed, you were fortunate enough to get such serene place in the noisy city like Mumbai. However, I liked huge swimming pool in your society the most.
I didn't realize how time flew when were together. I believe the range of activities like swimming, cooking at home, playing board games made our weekend special. Playing cards late night was the real fun and special thanks for making tea at 3 am in the morning.
I will also be delighted, if you would join me on the trek that I have planned with my roommates next month. Considering your interest in hiking trails, I won't listen no from you. Going for the trekking in this season would be really adventurous.
Hope to see you soon.
Kind regards,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ing pool in your society the most. I didnt realize how time flew when were togethe...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
... and special thanks for making tea at 3 am in the morning. I will also be delighted, if you w...
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Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...nterest in hiking trails, I wont listen no from you. Going for the trekking in thi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55801104972 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19733974259 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723756906077 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.247895809 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.9285714286 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290339038604 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865596528231 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061975885296 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159737838339 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548326389197 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.