You have a bicycle that you are no longer using You would like to sell it to a friend write a letter to your friend In your letter explain why you are no longer using your bicycle describe your bicycle explain why you think your friend would like to have

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You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain why you are no longer using your bicycle.
describe your bicycle.
explain why you think your friend would like to have it.

Submitted by Mahsa k on Sun, 05/12/2019 - 00:10

Dear John,

I hope you are well and sorry I have not written to you for ages. I want to let you know, that I decided to sell my bicycle. As I remember you always liked to have a bike, so I thought you would be interested to buy my bike.

As you know, I work as marketing manager and I have no more external time to riding and it is my job demanding. On the other side, I have moving to a new apartment and my new place is enough far away from office, then I have to get to work by bus. The last reason is we have a big GYM with all kind of facilities in our office, and I try to get my regular exercise there.

Let me explain my bicycle's features. It is a really nice ten-speed racing bicycle, so it is lightweight and fast. In addition, it is very nice silver color with golden lines. I promise you would like it if you see it.

As I remember, you always liked to riding your own bike. So when I decided to sell my bike, I prefer to tell you at the first. I can sell it to you at a special price.

Let me know if you are interested, and we'll discuss the price.

Best wishes,

Mahsa

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, then, well, in addition, kind of, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95964125561 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22115730772 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538116591928 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0413621572 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353401174841 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124355634885 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992432994726 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196665558832 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885103232014 0.0580467560999 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.1 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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