Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays being a vegetarian is already a part of the society's norm. The way humans survive is not by ingesting vegetables alone. The writer does not agree with the proposition and this essay will discuss both the benefits and the drawbacks of not eating meat or fish and his view of the topic.
Humans need to consume various types of food including meat and vegetables in order to avoid suffering from nutrient deficiencies. Moreover, as a vegan, you need to shop often for food supplies since most of the vegetables have short shelf life. Pesticides is also one of the things that a person should watch out since there are already a huge number of individuals going vegetarian so crops will be of high demand and as a result, farmers will induce their products with different kinds of chemicals.
On the other note, aside from availability, ingesting meat also has its own advantages. Livestock is one the major contributors of carbon emission which means eating farm animals can be an aid to the arising problem of global warming. Additionally, agricultural products are affordable and can supply enough energy and nutrients to the human body.
Therefore I conclude that indulging greens may provide good health but it is still not sufficient for the body's requirement. Balanced diet is needed and people should consider taking variety of food in moderation. It is also important to have knowledge and understanding on your genes and the environment that you are living in. All the aforementioned are factors that will guide a person on how to live a long and healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'shop'.
Suggestion: often shop
...cies. Moreover, as a vegan, you need to shop often for food supplies since most of the veg...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...problem of global warming. Additionally, agricultural products are affordable and...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rgy and nutrients to the human body. Therefore I conclude that indulging greens may pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94756554307 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77971765226 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2841686968 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152276301902 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442111738932 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575173326452 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855968732375 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395975349603 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.