You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Hey John,
how are you.Hope this letter finds you well.Do you know last week i was going to play an inter school competition football match where i have planned everything with all the practise and plans what we all got,we were going accordingly.but, suddenly i got a news that my team member got into an accident and unable to play for the match ,to which i was very disappointed that I am not going to win the match without him. but soon our coach made some changes and we played match with full of energy with a goal to win the match and finally we WON!
So, I am very happy to tell you about that day how we were sad and we were thinking that we are going to lose but our coach helped us with lot of encouragement, from our parents to build our confidence as he was an important person for the match, but soon all resolved with us by winning the match.
Hope you will be happy hearing this news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hey John, how are you.Hope this letter finds you w...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hope
Hey John, how are you.Hope this letter finds you well.Do you know ...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Do
...are you.Hope this letter finds you well.Do you know last week i was going to play ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er finds you well.Do you know last week i was going to play an inter school compe...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... you know last week i was going to play an inter school competition football match where...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...l the practise and plans what we all got,we were going accordingly.but, suddenly i ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...we were going accordingly.but, suddenly i got a news that my team member got into...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...e going accordingly.but, suddenly i got a news that my team member got into an acciden...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ccident and unable to play for the match ,to which i was very disappointed that I ...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... unable to play for the match ,to which i was very disappointed that I am not goi...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...not going to win the match without him. but soon our coach made some changes and we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2816091954 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30542880648 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 16.3608247423 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.392717655 44.8134815571 409% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.333333333 76.5299724578 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 16.8248392259 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 4.34317383033 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130765991934 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108277508859 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037623211111 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106711774164 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268733573709 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 8.37731958763 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.99 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 7.45979381443 300% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.43 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 8.54432989691 295% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 8.15463917526 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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