Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are opposing views regarding whether public money should be spent on art and culture or whether official support should be allocated to cultural events. In my opinion, while the former is good for developed countries, the latter is more beneficial for underdeveloped ones.
In developed nations, it can be significantly advantageous if the government spending is channelled into supporting art and culture as it benefits the authorities and individuals as a whole. To specify, all forms of art are designed to reflect human’s daily life and encourage people of all classes to have a positive outlook on life. For this reason, it helps employees to uplift themselves after an exhausting day at work and promote work efficiency. As a result, this is beneficial to the national government, as the work force is empowered, and the workers, as their stress is relieved.
As for places in which there is a huge gap between the wealthy and the poor, there will be far greater advantages if state support should be used to tackle such burning issues as hospital overload or traffic problems. By way of illustration, while thousands of Vietnamese patients have clamoured for an improvement in hospital infrastructure because of an overwhelming of sick people, Vietnam poured millions of dollars into holding traditional festivals across the country to foster its cultural values. Therefore, an investment by the government in such events could lead to public frustration.
In conclusion, while funding art and culture can be advantageous to the authorities in developed nations, providing finance for cultural projects can have some drawbacks in underdeveloped ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, as for, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12766874108 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5604252183 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300843281824 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108081075745 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752586001093 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189261214216 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658995182844 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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