People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past fifty years, there is an increasingly growing number of people who live abroad including immigrants. While it is argued by many that following customs and traditions should be taken for the sake of adapting new lives, there still remains some arguments against this issue because it is responsible for limits of diversity of cultures. Overall, it is my personal view that local rules should indeed be obeyed when living in in a new country for the following reasons.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that following the local culture will facilitate life in a new country rather than losing freedom and self-esteem. During our stay in the host country, if we adopt the local customs, it will be helpful for us to get better communication with the local people. Meanwhile, when we adjust ourselves to the local people's behavior, it will make us easier to socialize with them and not to be let isolated. In addition, not only will this help local people to better understand the foreigners but this also prevents foreigners from suffering any culture shock.
Even more importantly, culture and customs are intimately bound up with business. Knowing how to conduct business in a new country is a vital part of the process. Understanding the culture and the customs involved is often as important as knowing how to market in those areas. For instance, do your products comply with the countries’ local laws? Do they need to be adapted to use in different cultures? Even the packaging may need some tweaking to make it more suitable. We might also see an opportunity for a new product that would suit the new market. Additionally, dealing with customers and suppliers is an important part of doing business. Thus, it is essential to understand the local country’s etiquette to avoid misunderstanding.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that it is vitally pivotal to be accustomed to local customs during the period of living abroad due to its impact on not your daily life but your success as well. In years to come, I personally believe that education campaigns regarding preparing for culture shock should be adopted in society, particularly in schools where many students choose to study abroad to ensure better after adaptation after moving to a new country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...les should indeed be obeyed when living in in a new country for the following reasons...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
..., when we adjust ourselves to the local peoples behavior, it will make us easier to soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97680412371 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8591791961 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548969072165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9446575047 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.277777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194917596556 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591732736296 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401156775934 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122116446845 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595958867524 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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