Marketing and promotion is thr key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree?.
It is considered by some that the best way to suceed in the world of business is through advertising and promoting products. While I agree that it has a major influence, other factors are equally important such as competent staff and strategical location.
One obvious reason why marketing is vital for a company to reach the top is that it encourages people to buy. It is certainly true with TV advertisments targeting teens and children. These age groups will pester their parents to purchase a certain products out of curiosity, consequently, benefiting the company with increased sales. In addition to that, promotional campaign, for instance sponsorship in sport events and medical missions create a pleasant image for the brand. By doing this, the public is subconsciously influenced to support and purchased merchandise in return for the assistance they provided to their favorite team and in their community.
However, there are also other essential contibuting factors to establish a trademark in the business. Firstly, employees that are well-trained, passionate and sucess driven will deliver great perfermance and results to the organizations. Secondly, a good location provides an assurance of the longevity and sucess. A perfect example are the establishments near schools or universities and office hub. Profits in these area are higher compared to other places with less consumers. Lastly, without good budgeting a business can go bankrupt. This means that careful planning of all related finances in business operations should be handled smoothly to secure continous sucess of the company.
In conclusion, although publicity campaign is an important element in business sucess, hardworking staff and well-planned location have an impact aswell.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...ter their parents to purchase a certain products out of curiosity, consequently, benefit...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...eam and in their community. However, there are also other essential contibuting factors to establ...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...universities and office hub. Profits in these area are higher compared to other places wit...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun consumers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...re higher compared to other places with less consumers. Lastly, without good budgeti...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsumers. Lastly, without good budgeting a business can go bankrupt. This means t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53505535055 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07575145306 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2621925328 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619216516493 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175170878627 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218047814392 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333355222831 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263196558663 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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