You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to raise concerns regarding dinner which I had at your restaurant “Silver Spoon” on Sunday evening. I had visited your hotel for celebration of my father’s 75th birthday on Sunday evening. I was accompanied by my father, mother & wife & the overall experience of the dinner was very unsatisfactory.
I had booked the table for 4 at 8 pm earlier that morning, but when we reached we were made to wait for 10 minutes for the table. Once we were settled, we ordered the dinner and to our disappointment the food was really sub-standard. The sizzler which we had ordered had uncooked chicken which I promptly showed it to the waiter and instead of apologizing he casually replied that we already have had similar complaints from other customer before but the chef simply doesn’t improve. The overall service was very unprofessional and disappointing which ruined the evening for our family.
Kindly take appropriate action against the waiter and try improving customer service along with that kindly take care of the food which is being served to the customer else it will create a huge problem for your hotel in future. Kindly revert back with an apology from you side and hoping for an improved service next time.
Regards,
Vishal Panda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apos;s 75th birthday on Sunday evening. I was accompanied by my father, mother & ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the dinner was very unsatisfactory. I had booked the table for 4 at 8 pm earl...
^
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ll create a huge problem for your hotel in future. Kindly revert back with an apology fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84235962968 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7533782902 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904573707958 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353387393321 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315536533261 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584336991237 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00745291357119 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.