The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The charts below illustrate the average consumption in a general meals in the United States of three kind of nutrients namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.
it can be clearly seen from the charts that there are some different in the consumption of each nutrient between each meal.
According to the charts, the percentage of sodium in dinner is largest which it is just above 40 percent while the rate in the lunch come next with just under one third percent. In addition, the proportion of sodium in breakfast and snacks are the same with 14 percent.
Meanwhile, the saturated fat percentage have the similar trend with sodium, the proportion of this nutrients in the dinner come top with under 40 percent whereas the rate in lunch is not far behind with 26 percent. However, the proportion of saturated fat in snacks and breakfast is approximately 20 percent.
By contrast, there are some different in the rate of added sugar in those meals. Firstly, the added sugar percentage is the highest with just over 42 percent whilst the others nutrients proportion are just under a quarter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...te the average consumption in a general meals in the United States of three kind of n...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...ral meals in the United States of three kind of nutrients namely sodium, saturated f...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...dium, saturated fat and added sugar. it can be clearly seen from the charts tha...
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Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ar trend with sodium, the proportion of this nutrients in the dinner come top with u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, third, whereas, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90374331551 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56521784438 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3558057079 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937062070359 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448562929256 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544361520598 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067472727252 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558633346741 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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