Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people contend that children will become selfish when they only make choices based on their own interest, while others maintain that the freedom of making decisions really matters a lot. From my perspective, a child can be more decisive when he grows up if he is allowed to choose.
Some worry that children's decisions are only for themselves and they might foster bad habits like not caring about others. For instance, if a kid is fond of Western food such as the steak and French fries, he might ask his parents to cook the steak at home or order expensive steak in the restaurant frequently. If a child enjoys the roller coaster, then the amusement park can be the sole destination in every summer vacation. However, those choices are only favored by the kid rather than most of the families. The kids don't know the result of those choices and they take it for granted that everyone will follow them no matter where they want to go or what they would like to eat. All these will definitely lead to detrimental results. They might ignore the feelings of others and only do what favors themselves.
Nevertheless, when given opportunities to choose, children can quickly obtain the ability to make the best choice. In the shopping mall, children can buy what they like. Although some may argue that children might only pick the famous and dear ones, the recent survey shows that children have the ability to balance the price and the design. In addition, students will choose their major in college and their jobs after graduation without hesitation when they are used to making their own choices. In this highly competitive society, too much hesitation might indicate that chances are gone.
All in all, although some choices might only benefit children themselves, with more knowledge, they gradually learn to make the best decision and become decisive when they grow up. After all, the successful person is usually the one who can quickly determine what to choose.
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, while, after all, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88724035608 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38316067037 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578635014837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8678468538 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222259531927 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685729205319 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724365279209 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14272155474 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559386073424 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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