What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad
Nowadays, the number of people who migrate from their country for living and studying abroad is on the increase. The primary benefit of this phenomenon is the ability to improve the quality of life, and the difficulty of integrating into the new society is the main drawback.
Many people cannot resist the allure of having a prosperous life and they opt to live in other countries. people in remote areas do not have equal access to higher education and lucrative jobs, thereby being not able to provide their families even with basic necessities. By moving abroad, they might achieve their full potential and acquire a well-paid job or a higher degree. As a consequence, this can lead to a luxurious life, career growth, and increased levels of material possession. Thus, having a better living condition is a huge incentive for people to live in overseas.
Nonetheless, living in a foreign environment entails serious repercussions for people as well. Getting adjusted to living in a new country is an arduous task, since people confront numerous challenges, such as the language barrier and culture shock. No matter how fluent they are in the language of the nation that they are staying in, still, they will face difficulties while communication with the local people. Similarly, culture shock will cause them various confusions despite being prepared for that in advance. Hence, moving abroad can be a fount of frustration for many people.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that people may lay the foundation of higher living standards if they live in developed countries. However, this has other facets, such as the issues that they will face in their endeavors of adapting to a new community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...centive for people to live in overseas. Nonetheless, living in a foreign environ...
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Suggestion:
...deavors of adapting to a new community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, similarly, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17793594306 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75144898164 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5362109131 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132143378187 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516409802471 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618939353573 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907581934646 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343949138451 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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