Internet makes life become easier
In this modern era, we can find many technologies which have many advantages inside it. One of the amazing technologies is Internet. It can be known that internet makes life become easier than the past time. Internet gives more and more information than the other medias, it also saves our money and spend less time untill we do not waste our time much.
Nowadays many people use internet to get information because it is so easy to open your devices or mobile phone and connect it to internet you can get many informations. For examples, if we want to travel somewhere you never go, you can plan your journey from internet. Looking for some interesting places or good hotels to live and how can you get there.
It can be known that internet can save our money more. Because we just pay internet fee each month without any other cost. However we do not mandatory to buy newspaper everyday to get the latest news or when we want to make a call it spend less money for paying pulse. Today who go to foreign country can make communication with their family without problem.
So, with internet we do less effort and spend less time to get anything we wish. It is like when you want to buy something just sit in your seat and open the world wide web you will find everything and also you can compare the prices.
To sum up, internet makes our life become easier with their advantages. With less effort, money, and time we can what we want to do.
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we can find many technologies which have many advantages inside it.
Description: 'it' refers what?
internet makes life become easier than the past time.
internet makes life easier than that in the past time.
it also saves our money and spend less time
it also saves our money and spends less time
Sentence: However we do not mandatory to buy newspaper everyday to get the latest news or when we want to make a call it spend less money for paying pulse.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to newspaper and everyday
Description: The fragment it spend less is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past tense
Sentence: With less effort, money, and time we can what we want to do.
Description: The word can is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to can
Sentence: Internet gives more and more information than the other medias, it also saves our money and spend less time untill we do not waste our time much.
Error: untill Suggestion: until
Error: medias Suggestion: media
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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