You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letteradvise them of your situationexplain how this is affecting yourequest a new cardYou do NOT need to wri

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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear

Dear Sir,

Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.

My name is Derek Bern, and I am perusing Geological Sciences from St. Peters College and currently in second year.

I am writing this letter to bring into your kind notice that I have lost my id card while travelling in a train.

Due to this I am not able to attend my theory and lab classes and ended up with limited access to the library as for all this student id is needed. I am currently way behind my syllabus and mid-terms are starting from next month.

Therefore I hereby would like to request you to kindly issue me a new id card as early as possible so that I can cover my syllabus in time.

Thanks for giving the matter your attention.

Inconvenience regretted If caused any.

Yours Sincerely,
Derek Bern

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope this letter finds you in pink of yo...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...-terms are starting from next month. Therefore I hereby would like to request you to k...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55172413793 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38299564668 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68275862069 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0654986044 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248835402629 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102007186063 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849220112489 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113467358235 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956847340062 0.0580467560999 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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