There are some motives for people to work. Some people think money is the most important. Do you agree or disagree?
Finding a good job that provides the kind of salary which can fulfill the luxuries of life is the desire of everyone. Hence, there is no doubt that it is the most important consideration for people while deciding a job. However, I differ with this view as there are many other elements that make a person feel satisfied with the work.
The major reason I believe so is because wealth is not the measurement for happiness. Every person in this world is running after earning as much as possible, but the overall happiness index is on a decline. So, the first thing that needs checking is whether the job gives satisfaction to the person or not. Various personalities from around the world can be taken as an example here. One such name I can think of is the renowned stand-up comedian, Ellen DeGeneres. She worked many jobs in her youth but with the only motive of earning enough to fulfill the basic needs, until an incident led her to comedy, where she finally found her calling, regardless the money.
Other than that, quite a large number of people work because the job interests them. It is observed many times, at many places that parents try to dictate the career path for their child, the sole reason being the lucrative amount of money they can earn. However, the child enters the profession half-heartedly which eventually leads to a lot of struggle and failure. In many cases, the person even becomes extremely depressed because of all the discouraging results.
At last, I would like to say that the intend is not to degrade the value of money, but people should understand that it is not the only thing in this world. So instead of focusing on the figures in the bank account, everybody must introspect what their real desire is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ss the money. Other than that, quite a large number of people work because the job interests t...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of struggles'.
Suggestion: a lot of struggles
...alf-heartedly which eventually leads to a lot of struggle and failure. In many cases, the person ...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s. At last, I would like to say that the intend is not to degrade the value of money, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, while, kind of, no doubt, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69155844156 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45771071594 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8653543053 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128834903343 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393228238837 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487540571909 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775399404237 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153224103397 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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