Parents often buy their children many toys.what are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a large toys.
Nowadays Many of the Guardian are always purchasing plethora types of games for their child. In my opinion, I think that an obtain different kind of toys for a kid can bring more problems for children compare to any advantage it might bring.
On the one side, the main advantage of child have more toys, that create an environment in which children can easily learn about an electronic games, so that they easily understand and gain knowledge to play better in video games.Moreover they can eat money through showing their skills on internet.For example, many eminent game manufacturing companies are looking for a child that have acquire knowledge about the toys for an advertisement purpose of their product because of this more children want that toy car as well as company gives money to child for advertising.
On the other side, there are two major problems to children have many kind of toy cars, vehicle and electronic aeroplane. Firstly children are not keen to Interest to play outside sports, as a result their physical fitness is affecting consequently issue related to health such as obesity taken place. Secondly,Children are start avoiding to study, if they are surrounded with toys.In other words, most of the time child spend on playing with toys due to this, kid can not achieve good marks in school exam.
In conclusion, being unhealthy body or low grades in school far outweigh any of the minor benefits that could result from providing toys to children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68784406601 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.720338862 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.428571429 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4285714286 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 26.7142857143 7.06120827912 378% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223015307669 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102021787044 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351356531262 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129401586448 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492692250639 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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