It is important to give children the chance to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that providing children the option to think independently and enabling them to make their own choices is vital for them. I totally disagree with this statement as giving such opportunity can lead children to follow inappropriate path and can also bring disrespect towards elders.
The main reason why independence for kids on taking personal decisions is harmful is because this can easily deviate them from their path. Children can come under influence of others quite easily and don't think what could be the long-term effect. This can lead them to become a drug addict or an alcoholic which eventually affects them in negative way. According to one research published in NY Times it indicated that children who were given freedom to make choices of their life had 30% less probability to achieve financial stability. Thus, poor judgement capabilities and immature mindset can be detrimental to children's future.
Another disadvantage is that kids taking their own decisions do not respect their parents or elders enough. If children have become successful after implementing their own decision, they develop false belief that they don't need anyone's help. This behavior can make that child egoist and often behaves poorly with his parents or other aged people. As a result of this, it can harm the society that he or she lives in. Moreover, when such children have to go through the difficult phase of their life, they fail to get helpful support. Therefore, it is quite important to have proper guidance for kids.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with the idea of giving liberty to kids to make their own choices as it creates serious impact on their future as well as can imbalance social setting. Kids should be able to provide their opinions but final decisions should be only made by their parents or guardians until they are matured enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04516129032 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56023379526 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7029297514 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257721078076 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836974138339 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058640402896 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163665537408 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271124566124 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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