A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Rajesh Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat and I am writing this letter to you regarding the job opportunity you have for waiters and waitresses in your restaurant and I want to apply for the same.
I am currently working as a waiter in a food industry office at the same locality, Working in the office has helped to gain different skills of presentation of food while serving and the manners which are required while dealing with different people. Although my current salary is low and I am not able to feed my family so, I have decided to look for another job to fulfil my needs.
I can work for full time from Monday to Saturday, even I can also work on an overtime basis if required. Further, I will be available for interview at any day in the coming week. I hope you will understand my requirements and allow to take part in the interview.
Waiting for your response, thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rajesh Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat and I am writing ...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...b to fulfil my needs. I can work for full time from Monday to Saturday, even I can als...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...ll understand my requirements and allow to take part in the interview. Waiting for y...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64577746765 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0089280021 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293311801634 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13028542407 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115499801604 0.0603063233224 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207528078282 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133626669714 0.0580467560999 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.