Claim: The emergence of the online "blogosphere" has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.
Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
The given claim is about the drawbacks of increasing trend of online networking created in this generation whereas the reason justifies as to why is this online blogosphere has deprived the political quality of the united states. As the reason undoubetdly justifies the claim of online blogosphere effects on the political quality it should also be taken in account about its usefulness.
As the increasing use of internet this generation, It also potentiated the online blogosphere trend in recent decades. This may weaken the political stability in ways as to the opinion of many critics due to personal connection with a certain politician or a political party may affect a huge number of people. This may include people with absolute no knowledge about political status of the country or people with partial or influenced views.
Also, when anyone can publish political opinions the amount of research about debate on any political issue may degrade in quality of information as no rational platform for discussion is seen. The atmosphere of online blog by a amateur or a learned individual is difficult to identify leading to rumor or biased view developed in the people of the country.
Furthermore, due to increasing negative views on this may lead to reduced interests of individuals in study of political issues and covering of the political issues.
Contrary to this the only pro which could be seen is the people of the nation can use online blogosphere to put there views upfront and this may help the goverment or political system be in a closer ground to the people of the nation.Hence, the use of this platfom indifferent platform can result in different impact but wider use of this is usually noted leading to decline in political topic coverage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...political quality of the united states. As the reason undoubetdly justifies the cl...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... seen. The atmosphere of online blog by a amateur or a learned individual is diff...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...oser ground to the people of the nation.Hence, the use of this platfom indifferent pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03412969283 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8284188881 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501706484642 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.072343833 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.888888889 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304584157733 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140535469869 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801685583159 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183119978334 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543683226148 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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