Advertising not only make people buy something they don't need or cannot afford, but also they can convey information to increase their life quality. What's your opinion?
Our society has been witnessing the contradictory views regarding whether advertising is conducive to an individual’s life quality. Some people claim that advertising makes people buy something they don’t need or cannot afford while others disagree. From my observation, the positive influences of advertising outweigh the negative ones.
At the outset, there are multifarious benefits of advertising, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that it conveys information of various products to increase customers’ life quality. It can not only offer commercial of kinds of goods but also push entertainment notifications to people, which gives people more choices to spend time and money to make their life more colorful. To further support this statement, the latest research of Oxford reveals that 80% of the population in the UK prefer to explore new information from advertising.
However, there are several pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential merits of advertising. Firstly, the preponderant one is that advertising often exaggerates the quality of products. Secondly, advertising stimulates consuming expenditure which makes customers spend more money. Lastly, according to a report from the New York Times 2018, edition, in the worldwide 65% of advertisements contain fake news or information.
As discussed above, one can conclude advertising has benefited individual’s life quality in numerous ways from offering commercial of kinds of goods, pushing entertainment notifications to people and whatnot. Nevertheless, we cannot oblivious to some likely demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88085106383 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37272633539 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646808510638 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7582889839 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280702060346 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864436501746 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910755060045 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154590151707 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080427581859 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.