car ownership
Car industry us a billion dollar market in the world and it grow every year. Since, Cars invented, they increase daily on streets. Millions of cars manufactured every year bay companies. Daily increment of cars on streets and roads, Give birth to huge traffic jams. I'm totally agree with statement that many cities in the world become big traffic jam.
In the modern era, Life become so quick, Everyone want a easy and reliable mode of transportation. So people desired to buy their own car, Wether it is new old. This desire of people become cause of a massive traffic jam in the cities. As an illustration, In 2017, Bejing was witness the biggest traffic jam of the decade. This massive traffic jam slow down entire bejing for 12 days and people complete their two days travel in 10-12 days. Moreover, Car companies also play a improtant role to cars increment on roads. For profit and increase sales, Car companies build cheap cars, launched several schemes and provide loans to coustmors. that make easy to buy car for individual's.
What government do to encourage people to use public transport? Firstly, Government improve public transport system of thier country, make it reliable and reasonable for public. However, Government increase the road tax and sales tax on cars. Apart from this, Government use reward system like discount on fair, wevier on tax, free travel for few days etc., to encourage individual's to use public transport.
To put it in nutshell. I pen down saying that
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- Demad of food is increasing 56
- Reasons to join college 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grows'?
Suggestion: grows
...llion dollar market in the world and it grow every year. Since, Cars invented, they ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...roads, Give birth to huge traffic jams. Im totally agree with statement that many ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ra, Life become so quick, Everyone want a easy and reliable mode of transportatio...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...days. Moreover, Car companies also play a improtant role to cars increment on roa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...schemes and provide loans to coustmors. that make easy to buy car for individuals. ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'increases'.
Suggestion: increases
...sonable for public. However, Government increase the road tax and sales tax on cars. Apa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93280632411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54576754023 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8576128831 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6842105263 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3157894737 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185387055171 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668119026333 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832575274693 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956400964181 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968465339268 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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