Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life
separate from their work life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few numbers of people do not worry to spend spare time with their friends while rest of the people wants to keep distance in between personal and professional life. I, however, believe that connecting of personal and professional life has number of disadvantages but, it is beneficiary to some extent especially for those who always like to be gathered or has friendly mind sets. To begin with, I would like to outline the few disadvantages of spending time with co-worker in leisure time which is entirely different pertaining to office. Some intellectual people are concerned that people behave and talk in office according the decorum of office which hide plenty of thing about people that actually is far beneficial for higher designation namely; manager, senior manager and many others. Foremost thing is to be keep gap between employees and managers is sustainability of respect among the organization. Furthermore, many adepts assert that remaining close with office colleagues after work decreases the value of person specially of dominated positions holders, alongside some people want to ultra-careful owing to leak any private information between the employees.
On the flip side, it has commonly seen that mostly youngish people are much engage with each other in their offices that create bounding between them. One of the obvious benefits of spending spare time with colleagues is to be share knowledge and experiences as well as help each other outside of the office in case of any urgency or in any problem. Some pedagogical experts said, spending extra time with office friends will always be worthwhile in a fraction of job tenure whether it is associated with office or personal problem. Last but not the least, socializing with friends in leisure time is most fascinated thing which always helps people in worst time.
To sum up, spending spare time with colleagues could have both consequences but, its up to the situation and designation of people that how it should be managed accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'minded'.
Suggestion: minded
...ays like to be gathered or has friendly mind sets. To begin with, I would like to ou...
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Line 1, column 660, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of things'.
Suggestion: plenty of things
...ording the decorum of office which hide plenty of thing about people that actually is far benef...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...cinated thing which always helps people in worst time. To sum up, spending spare time...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...agues could have both consequences but, its up to the situation and designation of ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t how it should be managed accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18042813456 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78904447612 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5233711495 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312029355398 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119428931872 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736047953622 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201831410777 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700824313766 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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