You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Frank,
I was so sorry to hear about your accident! I hope you're feeling a lot better today and that it's not too boring in hospital.
(Expresses sympathy and asks about the reader's health.)
The match on Saturday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably because you weren't there to score that extra goal! The awful thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, when suddenly they scored another goal. I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the back of the net.
(Tells him the score and briefly describes how you felt about the match.)
I think the weather was to blame. It was a really wet day and the pitch was very muddy. By the end of the game you could hardly see the grass and we were sliding around in the mud. Everyone was exhausted.
(Mentions the weather and conditions.)
Let us know when you're going home and we'll arrange for someone to bring you to watch the next game. The rest of the team send their regards and we all wish you a speedy recovery.
(Finishes with good wishes.)
Best wishes,
Charlie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...rry to hear about your accident! I hope youre feeling a lot better today and that its...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'readers'' or 'reader's'?
Suggestion: readers'; reader's
... Expresses sympathy and asks about the readers health. The match on Saturday was di...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 58, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'all' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'alls'.
Suggestion: alls
...rday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably because you werent there to s...
^^^
Line 6, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...e score was 2 all, probably because you werent there to score that extra goal! The awf...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... werent there to score that extra goal! The awful thing was that we were winning un...
^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...her and conditions. Let us know when youre going home and well arrange for someone...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, really, so, well, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46391752577 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10967738161 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2550417672 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.7333333333 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9333333333 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173730193453 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519862404224 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602599701016 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825117429796 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684312308737 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.