Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern school. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Self-control is an important aspect of every body’s life. In modern institutes, self-control problems are always increasing. A significant number of individuals believe that a mentor should be responsible for teaching discipline. However, others do not agree and consider it should be parent duty. Although, teachers are expert in guiding discipline to students, I believe that parent role is more important in teaching good manners to their children.
On the one hand, students spend 7 to 8 hours in schools on an average, and these institutes are professional in educating knowledge and discipline to students, therefore teachers should pay attention in improving the behaviour of children. Educators are skilled accordingly to guide student’s right direction in any course of life and more importantly, students often listen and follow their teacher rules and orders. Hence, teachers can be a great mentor in bringing discipline among students.
On the other hand, I share my opinion with others believe that parents guidance can play a major role in teaching discipline. Students spend most of the time at home with parents, as a result, parents are more aware of the behaviour of children. Hence, a parent can correct their mistakes timely and effectively. In addition to that, children usually copy the behavior of parent and learn most of the social behavior from mother or father. For instance, a recent survey from the children development centre revealed that the bad behaviour of children is always linked with the violence in the house. Hence, correct manners from parents can bring discipline in children.
In conclusion, while teachers are professional in guiding good manners to students, I believe that parent should take responsibility for teaching discipline because guidance from the parent will be forever with children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43598615917 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9535218212 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2153004083 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150203153465 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584018948387 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042773028901 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106135190743 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361377882736 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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