Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Initially, king of the regime was responsible for the growth and urbanisation of the country. Urbanisation is diverse it includes many things starting education universities, banks, hospitals and markets. However, in this present world government plays the same pivotal role. I agree with the author's argument that governments need to provide sufficient funds for development of cities. But after some point, the growth of the city reaches an apex in order to modernize it further we need humungous amount of funds. That could be utilized to urbanize numerous rural areas.
To begin with, the government is an authoritative force, which has the power to decide fund segregation. Funds is the money that people pay in the form of tax. What sum should be given to the following city and sector. Each year country has its own budget, then it officially announces the amount provided for a particular sector.
Secondly, cities contribute the major share of the amount recieved by the government. Since cities has all the facilities needed for a invidual to have a healthy and prosperous life like universities and hospitals, they have a convinient transport system. Urbans are immensly populated in comparision with rural areas. For instance, in India the population is 2 billion and 70% of the people stay in cities, others in rural areas. Especially in bombay the population density is 200 times that of a average rural area.
Additionally, a country's development is totally dependent on the major cities. Since the industries and companies have serious impact on the GDP, most of companies are present in cities.
Lastly, after some time major cities reach the apex of development after which the further development demands high price. In that given price numerous small towns can be converted in urbanised colonies. Since, the countries overall development depends on the complete nations development.
To sum up, I accordance with the writer that cities must need a finical support to grow. Which can be provided by the government. It is necessary of authorities to provide sufficient funds since cities has the major contribution to the nation's tax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...the same pivotal role. I agree with the authors argument that governments need to provi...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ities has all the facilities needed for a invidual to have a healthy and prospero...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...population density is 200 times that of a average rural area. Additionally, a ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...mpanies have serious impact on the GDP, most of companies are present in cities. Lastly, after...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can be converted in urbanised colonies. Since, the countries overall development depe...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...all development depends on the complete nations development. To sum up, I accordance...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es must need a finical support to grow. Which can be provided by the government. It i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23563218391 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86860491766 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.75040889 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2173913043 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1304347826 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169585355657 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426528038471 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538069270092 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083441864831 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051349269707 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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