Those who treat politics and morality as though they were separate realms fail to understand either the one or the other
In this modern era, people believe that politicians do not stand on principles, are not moral. However, this was not case in past before couple of decades, locals used to have faith and where loyal to their leaders. Public representatives believe that to continue in politics they have to comprise with their principles. Nonetheless, they forget that people have voted him by getting impressed by his principles. Sometimes politicians get blind, obsessed with the power and money that comes along with it. They forget the main reason behind getting in to politics to help poor people. I agree according to the author that politics and morality are not separate realms, to fully understand politics we need to juxtapose both of them.
First and foremost, People have power to elect their representatives, in this process voters try find a person who will adhere to his principles and will not comprise with his morals even at the most adverse conditions and will not be affected by the power and money that comes along with. For instance, the chief minister of Goa Mr. Goel, was elected as chief minister for five continuous tenures. Although he was in power for long period, his net worth was low, he did not have any luxurious car. when asked about it by fellow reporters why people elected him for two decades. His answer was he never had interest in luxurious things and was elected by people to serve their needs not his.
Secondly, Most of the people believe that in this present world most the people in power are corrupt and are rife with scams. it is obvious for them to think since it has become banal that politicians do scams and are least bothered about the people who elected him. For example, B.J.P had won elections in 2014, after long period about nearly two decades, people dethroned congress since they were fed up with their fallacies. Hence, opted for B.J.P, however in their first two years news was out that B.J.P was involved in scam about nearly one billion dollars.
Lastly, people need to understand that both realms morality and politics are interconnected. Hence choose their leader wisely. A person who is free from scams and he should be known for his shrewdness. However, in this current situation it must be very difficult to find that type of a person. To illustrate, in the recent elections Ram was a well known leader and affluent person, he was winning elections from last two tenures. However, people have chosen Roy who is free from scams and adept at taking decisions.
To sum up, People should start realizing that both politics and morality are interrelated. Hence start electing leaders who are free from corruption and are judicious. They should adhere to there principles in most adverse conditions, they should not get blind by power and money that come along with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, lastly, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92116182573 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45965360064 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479253112033 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6920124311 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.88 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.28 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124457624037 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437135608387 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550702877129 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081262318056 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042127755812 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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