Those who treat politics and morality as though they were separate realms fail to understand either the one or the other
In this modern era, people believe that politicians do not stand
on principles, are not moral. However, this was not case in past before couple
of decades, locals used to have faith and where loyal to their leaders. Public
representatives believe that to continue in politics they have to comprise with
their principles. Nonetheless, they forget that people have voted him by
getting impressed by his principles. Sometimes politicians get blind, obsessed
with the power and money that comes along with it. They forget the main reason
behind getting in to politics to help poor people. I agree according to the
author that politics and morality are not separate realms, to fully understand
politics we need to juxtapose both of them.
First and foremost, People have power to elect their
representatives, in this process voters try find a person who will adhere to
his principles and will not comprise with his morals even at the most adverse
conditions and will not be affected by the power and money that comes along
with. For instance, the chief minister of Goa Mr. Goel, was elected as chief
minister for five continuous tenures. Although he was in power for long period,
his net worth was low, he did not have any luxurious car. When asked about it
by fellow reporters why people elected him for two decades. His answer was he
never had interest in luxurious things and was elected by people to serve their
needs not his.
Secondly, most of the people believe that in this present world
most the people in power are corrupt and are rife with scams. It is obvious for
them to think since it has become banal that politicians do scams and are least
bothered about the people who elected him. For example, B. J. P had won
elections in 2014, after long period about nearly two decades, people dethroned
congress since they were fed up with their fallacies. Hence, opted for B. J. P,
however in their first two years news was out that B. J. P was involved in scam
about nearly one billion dollars.
Lastly, people need to understand that both realm’s morality and
politics are interconnected. Hence choose their leader wisely. A person who is
free from scams and he should be known for his shrewdness. However, in this
current situation it must be very difficult to find that type of a person. To
illustrate, in the recent elections Ram was a well-known leader and affluent
person, he was winning elections from last two tenures. However, people have
chosen Roy who is free from scams and adept at taking decisions.
To sum up, People should start realizing that both politics and
morality are interrelated. Hence, start electing leaders who are free from
corruption and are judicious. They should adhere to their principles in most
adverse conditions, they should not get blind by power and money that come
along with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 28, column 69, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to them'.
Suggestion: obvious to them
... corrupt and are rife with scams. It is obvious for them to think since it has become banal that...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ality and politics are interconnected. Hence choose their leader wisely. A person wh...
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Line 41, column 58, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
... it must be very difficult to find that type of a person. To illustrate, in the recent e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, lastly, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01437371663 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51356677919 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476386036961 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.38483146067 365% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7336356446 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2142857143 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3928571429 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 38.0 4.97078651685 764% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123655188534 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039266215965 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522506766351 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366542623212 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05179132622 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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