An increasing number of people are changing their careers What are the reasons Do you think this is a positive or negative development to society

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An increasing number of people are changing their careers.
What are the reasons? Do you think this is a positive or negative development to society?"

In today’s workforce, while a majority of people struggle to seek a job there is a rising trend of others switching their careers owing to a couple of reasons. In my opinion, this kind of tendency should be looked at in a negative light as will be discussed.
There are a number of causes contributing to job-hopping. First of all, people make frequent job change in order to pursue a more rewarding employment including both external and internal factors. In terms of externality, relocation of accommodation or better working environment are among the reasons that forces people to change their jobs. Additionally, people themselves change jobs to gain experience as they can learn different skills when being retrained in a different occupation. Second, it is dissatisfaction with the leadership of senior management that makes people quit their original occupations. According to the LinkedIn’s survey on why people change job in 2015, discontent over immediate supervisors accounts for 41% of the answers.
Changing one’s career does seem to have some negative influences to the society. In the first place, if job-hopping extends, this trend will result in the lacking of experts in fields since changing jobs means that people do not have deep knowledge of a particular occupation. Furthermore, it would become an obstacle for companies to retain new-commers because they need a particular time to adapt new tasks and duties let alone fee for recruitment process and job-training. For employees, making job change in quick succession will lead to difficulty in landing a job in the future which further contributes to higher unemployment rate.
In conclusion, people’s contemplating a change of career is brought about by a lot of reasons and in the long run this development will more likely to put detrimental impacts on the employee in particular and the society in general

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, while, in conclusion, in general, in particular, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27960526316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17343864973 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7549320248 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212122225007 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755876056009 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408013529865 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129619093626 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361534088454 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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