Climate change is the biggest threat to our planet.
How accurate is this statement?
Are there any other big threats to mankind?
The planet Earths enormous hazard to all society is changes of our atmospheric
conditions. This statement is proven fact by many scientists and every individual can
relate this issue, as years ago our weather was different, however there are other threats
to our planet, as plastic which is related to climate changes all around the world.
Climate change is the biggest issue on 21.Century. Scientists started to talk about it
since 90’s but nobody did not took it seriously. Manufacture is our main resource and
income but it is causing air pollution which leads to a temperature raises and lack of
fresh air. Countries who have biggest industries released chemicals in the atmosphere
which caused acid rains and green house effect. Diesel cars are used in all around the
world which also caused CO2 released in air. For example China where all our products
come from, don’t have fresh air anymore. People wearing masks do not inhale toxic air
and buying air ballots of fresh air.
Plastic is another major issue which is related to global warming. Nowadays you can buy
anything which is already packed in plastic containers which leads beaches and forests
full of rubbish because people are reckless and throw anything in a nature. Unfortunately
this leads to animal species extinct, animals are dying when digesting plastic. In July
2019 there is event called ‘Plastic free July’ to aware people boycotting to use plastic
bags, straws, coffee cups etc and use more reusable bags, their own coffee mugs and
trying to use alternative ways.
In conclusion global warming to our society is major problem because it is caused lack of
fresh air, acid rains and temperature raise, however people can also help to improve our
environment to not use plastic and find alternative usage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Century
...imate change is the biggest issue on 21.Century. Scientists started to talk about it s...
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Line 6, column 36, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
... it since 90's but nobody did not took it seriously. Manufacture is our main r...
^^^^
Line 8, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the biggest'.
Suggestion: have the biggest
...s and lack of fresh air. Countries who have biggest industries released chemicals in the at...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19528619529 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51134667292 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2330203101 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15320928836 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563946876653 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850916804824 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446480856262 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639732968056 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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