Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is argued by some people that to gift a teenager, money is the best thing. while others believe that giving a material that is required must be gifted instead of money. In this essay i am going to discuss both views and give my opinion.
On one hand, money plays an important role for teenagers who are at the stage of learning about its value. gifting money to them can fulfill their requirements such as either buying a shoes or buying a gadget although care must be taken. By giving money can teach about the value for money by showing them savings technique and world treatment towards a money man. For instance, on my birthday i was gifted a watch by my uncle and it does not consists of extra features which i was looking for.
On the other hand, gift acts as a process of showing love to beloved ones on any suitable occasions. it must be given after asking them about their needs and subsequently it is valued for a long time. For instance, stethoscope given to my sister by my aunt which was an immediate requirement for her studies became the most valued gift.
Nevertheless, gift defines love for the person and will be used while money given will be forgotten easily in future.
To conclude, In my opinion gift is remembered for a long time and is helpful at needy time while giving money is not preferable because care must be taken about where the money is spent or any bad things are not done through it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4465648855 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34736548099 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2095509907 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307843495126 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127690674825 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767113393896 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190505849117 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125380290738 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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