ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him / her your other news
Dear John,
I'm writing this letter to inform you regarding my new job, I quite my previous job and join new organization as a Sales Manager.
As you knew that I'm working as a Sales Assistant in my previous company, and over there I had to work more than 8 hours because I was the solely person who was managing the whole Sales Department, which was quiet strenuous for me to handle. The salary which my old company offered was very low, and there were no incentives for the employees. So these are the main reasons that I resigned from there.
My new job is very fascinating and I'm really enjoying working as a Head Sales and Finance Manager in Sales Department. I'm supervising the whole department and assign the tasks to my subordinates. Apart from that, I've to meet our valuable clients on there premises and resolve technical issues regarding software applications, which are running in their organizations. Another task that I've to look after is the ledger balance of each customers because I'm also leading the Finance Department.
Aside from that, I've moved to new apartment, which is very close to my office. It's small, but it is located in a peaceful location instead of crammed area. Near to my apartment there is Gymnastic , where I go every day for the exercise after my office hour. and this activity is really helping me to burn some calories.
I hope you'll come and visit my hometown soon . I'm eagerly waiting for your visit at my place.
Looking forward to meet you soon.
Love,
Sadaf Alam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear John, Im writing this letter to inform you regar...
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...as a Sales Manager. As you knew that Im working as a Sales Assistant in my prev...
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.... My new job is very fascinating and Im really enjoying working as a Head Sales...
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...nd Finance Manager in Sales Department. Im supervising the whole department and a...
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...ager in Sales Department. Im supervising the whole department and assign the task...
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...ks to my subordinates. Apart from that, Ive to meet our valuable clients on there p...
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... their organizations. Another task that Ive to look after is the ledger balance of ...
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...edger balance of each customers because Im also leading the Finance Department. ...
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...inance Department. Aside from that, Ive moved to new apartment, which is very c...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... visit at my place. Looking forward to meet you soon. Love, Sadaf Alam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75187969925 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59077780797 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1310583406 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106406697017 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330211367838 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399058786281 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659439575543 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402543186582 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.