Some employers want to be able to contact their staff all times, especially holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
It is argued by a significant number of individuals that some managers want to have more touch with their workers even in their vacation time. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend in following paragraphs.
To begin with, contacting employees all the time will benefit the organization and employees in a number of ways. Firstly, the clarity towards the work flow will be more as doubts of the other employees can be questioned and answered without wasting time. Secondly, the dedication of employee towards the business will improve and the chance of promotion of an employee will be high. Thirdly, the business of the company will be smoother as full team effort will be applied to continue the operations even in holidays.
However, the freedom of employee will be effected by contacting them all the time. Employees prefer holidays to be spent with their favorite buddies and without any disturbance, therefore contacting them during vacation can increase stress in their life. In addition to that, it will have adverse impacts on their personal relationships. For instance, majority of the employees prefer to move out of home town during their vacation time to have more privacy and isolation, thus contacting them related to work during vacation will dilute the taste of holidays.
In conclusion, while the freedom of employee will be hampered with this trend, I believe it smoothes the operations of organization and increases the profit, which eventually will benefit employees also. The technology will help in achieving this target and in future, the employers will be able to have more communication with their employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23791821561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80381200926 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498141263941 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.111624154 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.416666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235604045974 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107155802078 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545104858598 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169718525249 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569778299154 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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