Impact of television shows on society?
The importance of television shows on society which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion.This essay will further elaborate my reason for the positive effects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that television shows are beneficial for our society as well as shows entertain children and ancestors. Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that television shows are entertain anyone in leisure time consequently shows provide knowledge and positive vibes as well as television have many good channels like discovery and history television which is good for our society. Needless to say all these merits stand of television in a good stead.
Elaborating my view point, this trend has some merits but one of the crucial effect is that now days television becoming backbone of our society As an illustration, television provide awareness news for survive from burglars and thief. Besides, television shows provide health guidance and weather report by channels.Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of television shows on society.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can a reach a conclusion that the benefits of television shows on society are indeed to great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3127753304 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86530606513 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2332803384 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.285714286 104.977214359 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.9669160288 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377978583334 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206629173219 0.0925447433944 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681571554146 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259622276593 0.151781067708 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702134414972 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 12.6369458128 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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