Most people prefer ready to eat food than home-made food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages.
Due to hectic work schedule, many individuals lack time to prepare food. As an result, some peoples prefer to consume packed food or already cooked food. In my opinion, the benefits seem too exiguous when compared to the drawbacks.
Irrefutably, in recent years numbers of people who are being diagnosis by terminal health problems like cancer are on a rise. The main reason for this unfortunate situation is due to the increased consumption of packaged food or ready eats food. These foods are rich in lipid fats and preservatives which will later turn in to unsaturated fats. These fats will be results in forming clots in blood. For example, recent survey by World Health Organization, people who prefer instant food are porn to several health issues due to their affected immune system by consuming these foods.
In contrast, for employees who are working for long hours because of their lethargy are not able to cook food. As an alternative to cook food they find these ready to eat food very useful. And also these types of foods are useful in cases of emergency situations where cooking of food is not possible. For example, in case of floods or war, these types of foods help the individual to satisfy their hunger where cooking food is not a practical option. Additionally, Astronauts completely depend on these types of foods.
In conclusion, packaged food or ready to eat can be consumed occasionally when an employee was unable to cook, and in cases of emergency. Regular consumption of these foods can result in several serious health issues. Thus the benefits are definitely eclipsed by the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dividuals lack time to prepare food. As an result, some peoples prefer to consume ...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...the drawbacks. Irrefutably, in recent years numbers of people who are being diagnos...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir lethargy are not able to cook food. As an alternative to cook food they find t...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...esult in several serious health issues. Thus the benefits are definitely eclipsed by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97426470588 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64413390282 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9592955271 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224413902456 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857078298464 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717139102873 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15290139434 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191765896661 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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