You are going on a short training course at a collage in Green mount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,
explain your situation
describe the accommodation you require
say when you will need it
Dear Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat, I am one of the selected candidates for the short course in your college. I am writing this letter to seek accommodation near the college from the 7 months. I do not have any contact in the city for that reason, I request you to provide valuable information about hostels or cottage in nearby areas.
I am looking for the separate single room with washroom attached. If the kitchen is available that will be more convenient. More important the pets should not be in the house as I have allergic to dogs or cats. Walkable distance from the college will be a great option, still, I can manage if the location is a little far.
Although the course is starting from 3rd July and it will finish on 30th November 2019, my ticket for Ireland from India are booked for 20th June. Therefore, I request you to look for a period of 7 months.
I hope you will not have any difficulty in helping me and I will be really grateful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat, I am one of the ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ostels or cottage in nearby areas. I am looking for the separate single room...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ate single room with washroom attached. If the kitchen is available that will be m...
^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y grateful to you. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54347826087 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4646843991 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5150583977 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143049017715 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542897587863 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047358949335 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886533723491 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595167060955 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.