Reasons to attend college
Despite the fact that, colleges or universities have a crucial role to shape the modern world, people join educational institutes for various reasons.I believe that the people go to colleges or universities for new life experiences, career preparation, gaining knowledge etc.
Colleges and universities have a deep impact on many individuals life's. Firstly Colleges or universities are like a stage to show talent or skills, medium to raising abilities to greatest levels, and learn or acquire new skills. Beacause different types of competitions or tournaments organised by educational institutes to courage and support abilities of students. For example, every years sports events organised by Indian government from district to national level, to support and encourage students. Secondly, people from all over the nation with different background and cultures join colleges or universities, which gives opportunity to see or understand the different culture and understand the view-point of other people.
Apart from that, another reason to attend college or university is to get degree, which is mandatory to obtain better or high ranked job in reputed companies. Moreover, college or university degree is one way to get increment in salary and designation. Finally, colleges or universities have a certain type of courses or programs, to gain knowledge or skills of chosen field.
To put it in nutshell, i pen down saying that the people's ambition to attend educational institutes is to get or deliver better and secure future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53164556962 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03202652575 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6335589558 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253025175774 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092519846287 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776742465283 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142470909414 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847912232249 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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