Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
The university, nowadays, have been providing education on technical as well as nontechnical subjects such as science, arts, and philosophy. Some people think students must study the subjects of their interest, while others opine differs as allowing them to study subjects related to science and technology only. I opine strongly the view of students studying the subjects of interest.
To begin with, modern world requires manpower with more technical knowledge as technology has been evolving and developing, day-by-day, people must have knowledge about science and technology. Computers, for example, are used in different sectors like hospitals, industries and business so people must have proper knowledge about it and can handle it more efficiently. Moreover, people with nontechnical knowledge are less likely to get selected by modern world companies as they might not be able to increase the level of competence of the company.
On the contrary, people forced to study the science and technological subjects are often demotivated in their jobs in future as they might think that they are made for other fields like arts and music. Sports person , for instance, have less time for science and technology studies as they have to focus on increasing their skills on their sport. If they were forced to study, they would not have got success in either fields, In my opinion, the subjects which are studied with our interest are easily understood and focus is also always maintained.
In conclusion, university students should study whatever subject they want in order to improve themselves in their field of studies, Overall, science and technology might be learned through training programs but they must learn subjects with their interest in universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts with their interest in universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42599277978 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73634869146 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1263676654 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359578030405 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147684216582 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925440036494 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218982326937 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647415597962 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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