Can the Internet replace museums and galleries?
There are more and more cities have their own museums and galleries. Some people argue that public museums and galleries can be replaced by browsing artworks on the Internet. In my view, I totally disagree with this idea.
It is obvious that the experience in museums and galleries are far better than watching pictures or videos online. No matter how high-resolution the multimedia can show, it can not give us a real and direct feeling about the works of art. The atmosphere in public museums and art galleries are spectacular, which also can not be presented through the Internet. For example, the lighting and layout of museums are a crucial element of the exhibition. In addition, it is evident that not all the artworks can be viewed from the Internet, except for some of the masterpieces.
Furthermore, the museums and galleries are symbols of the culture of a city. By acquiring knowledge from museums and galleries, we can better know the background of local people and promote cultural fusion. They spread the history and civilization of the local place while undertaking the responsibilities of education, especially for children. Kids can be inspired by the spirits of delicate antiques and art. Sometimes there are also guides explain the sources and meaning of artworks, or even answer questions of guests.
In a nutshell, public museums and galleries can offer a better experience for tourists, while it is also meaningful to education as a symbol of a city. Therefore, I think the Internet is impossible to replace the position of these public exhibition places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, therefore, while, except for, for example, i think, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10727969349 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90831603146 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6157687687 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489074095893 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152015698026 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13313547195 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308580474123 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779164424042 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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