People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
People generally make decisions either getting emotional or getting logical. The one's who gets emotional too quickly , they do make decisions too early . Many of the times these decisions are not proper. the decision maker should think about the after repurcursion of the decision. One should think of all the possibilities and situation before making any decision. sometimes the discussion should be done with related person before making any such decision. At an emotional moment the logical thinking power of people is less , so the logical decision arenot advised to be taken when emotional.
Firstly,there are many people who are short tempered or they gets emotional too quickly. they are generally on the spot decision makers,but most of these decisions are very quick and the results after that decisions are not thought by them. They take these decisions on the basis of that particular moment of time. Inorder to make long term decisions one should not take any decision based on any emotion , as there are chances that these decision may not lead to a long term success as the result of it was not thought in prior. The person taking emotional based decision are not good decision makers as they didnot think logically or practically about the situation.
Secondly, Inorder to make any successful decision or implement , the logical analysis of that situation and decision should be done so that if any problem in future one must have the backup and solution ready for it. Many aspects must be kept in mind and thought before making any decision, but those who make emotional decisions donot think of other people and situation after making decision,so their decision are afterwards considered to be poor decision makers according to the logic. But there are many cases where these kind of decision are proven as the best decision , Because at that moment those decision are considered to be the best.
Lastly, we can conclude that not all the people who make decision based on emotions are poor decision maker. Sometimes these decision are proved to be better than those logical ones . so on the basis of emotional decision we cannot say that those peple are poor decision makers everytime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04098360656 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50689595101 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431693989071 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8440080548 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.596607326086 0.243740707755 245% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235961155274 0.0831039109588 284% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117152355705 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.445475032582 0.150359130593 296% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695866630151 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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