Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology is being devoloped to ease the tasks of the human beings. It can be found everywhere around us. Technology is advancing exponentially these days. New products are being developed every second to aid humans to complete the tasks.
As the technology is developed for humans, it does help in simplifying our lives along with some complications related to it. In the earlier days, there was lot of time involved in performing complex problems in mathematics. Later, technological inventions related to development of calculator, which made those complex problems in mathematics to solve within a fraction of a second. There are several other examples of technology which are simlifying our lifes; like spectacles enhancing vision of people, escalators and elevators which requires less body effort compared to stairs.
Adoption to these technological inventions matters a lot. People show different levels of intelligence and adaptability. Generally, people with higher intelligence level can adapt to new technology with no problems. While, there are people which can find adpating to technology difficult because of complex things to be operated. Nowadays, technological pace is way ahead, this can be seen with the example of artificial intelligence. Artificial Intelligence has skills of human thinking, which works on it own to complete tasks. An Artificial Intelligence enabled car can take us from one place to another, without even people driving the vehicle.
In conclusion,while there are complication involved with technology, these complications are overshadowed with the advantages of technology that simplifies human lifes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 247.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68421052632 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24090522873 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4221645591 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111072587803 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353049684571 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416226292909 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068364410352 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474152982506 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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