In towns and cities, the large shopping malls
Shopping and purchasing style of the people has changed in the last few decades. Shopping centres substitutes the local markets in the urban area. I believe that the shopping centres and local markets have their own benefits and drawbacks. This essay deals with the impacts of shopping centers and local markets in people's life along with my opinion.
First of all, shopping malls became center of attraction to people. Now people buy and buy things from shopping malls to show their living standards. Secondly, people can buy everything of best quality from shopping mall. However, because of the best quality of products shopping is expensive in these shopping centers. It's hard to buy expensive products for middle or lower class people. Finally, in shopping malls gaming clubs and fun zones attract the individuals of all ages. For example:- DLF MALL has a India's biggest gaming park.
On the other hand, Small shops located in nearby markets. These small local shops fulfill the daily need of people's, because people cannot go to shopping malls every time for little things. Moreover, these local shops offer a variety of products from low quality to high quality. Apart from that, few local shops gives a home delivery service of products. Furthermore, these local shops save time and energy of people. Because People buy things while returning from office or work.
To put it in nutshell I pen down saying that attraction of shopping malls cannot affect the importance of local small shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of all ages. For example:- DLF MALL has a Indias biggest gaming park. On the ot...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Indias the biggest'.
Suggestion: Indias the biggest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, while, apart from, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32517985721 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5676512455 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7777777778 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259551765153 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103002133723 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539057682352 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170210193364 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495385545559 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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