The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A description of the city hospital's scheme was illustrated in 2 the maps between the 2007 and 2010. it is generally visible that although the both schemes look like similar, but there were some changes during a 3-year period.
With respect to the first map related to the 2007, along to the hospital road in the south of the main building there were 6 bus stops from both sides. however, after 3 years in 2010 these bus stops were totally demolished and a new bus station in the western corner of the road was built. it seems the main goal of construction was to make the public transportation be more centralised and prevent congestion along the main road.
Subsequently, a public car park was settled nearby the hospital in the eastern corner. however, 3 years before the car park encompassed both public and staff parking spots altogether, making the entrance of the hospital to be overflowed. Dividing the car park into 2 independent fields maintained the free and easy entrance to the hospital from the eastern side and the bottom .
Alternatively, 2 roundabouts in the juncture of the hospital road and city road were built letting the public and private cars move easily and avoid the traffic jam around the hospital.
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- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...n 2 the maps between the 2007 and 2010. it is generally visible that although the ...
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Suggestion: However
...there were 6 bus stops from both sides. however, after 3 years in 2010 these bus stops ...
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Suggestion: It
...e western corner of the road was built. it seems the main goal of construction was...
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Suggestion: However
...rby the hospital in the eastern corner. however, 3 years before the car park encompasse...
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Suggestion: .
...tal from the eastern side and the bottom . Alternatively, 2 roundabouts in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, so, as to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87203791469 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67959405118 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5510749045 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188970225326 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864575525475 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660445894515 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114222674787 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039740817299 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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