You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet. In your letter:-
(1) write the details of incident.
(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to airline.
(3) tell what you want if the bag is not found.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction from your airline, which is one of the reputed airlines in our country, on a recent trip to Paris.
I’ve planned a week’s vacation from 4th Sep to 10th Sep and choose your airlines to visit Paris. I BOARDED THE FLIGHT FROM Delhi (India) on 4th when I reached Paris airport, I couldn’t find my luggage. Upon inquiring your helpdesk, they found it is loaded on a flight to New York. They promised me that I will get my luggage in 24 hours, which did not happen until the last day of my vacation.
I’ve a medical condition, which requires daily medicine. Dosage to keep it under control, but unfortunately my medicines were in my lost luggage. I was stranded in an unknown place ad I faced a lot of challenge in purchasing them a s I did not had doctor’s prescription. Additionally, all my personal belongings like, clothing, toiletries, etc were in that bag and I faced a lot of problem in getting them, too.
I request your company to compensate the expenses that have occurred on this trip to Paris. Because I’ve planned a stress buster trip, but it turned out to be a disaster. I ‘ve attached receipt of airline ticket and hotel expenses, which I’ve paid on this trip.
Looking forward for a positive response, otherwise I’ll be forced to seek legal assistance.
Yours faithfully,
Aja
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d a lot of challenge in purchasing them a s I did not had doctor's prescript...
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Line 13, column 250, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...llenge in purchasing them a s I did not had doctor's prescription. Additionall...
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Line 13, column 303, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...os;s prescription. Additionally, all my personal belongings like, clothing, toiletries, etc were in...
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Line 13, column 384, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...tries, etc were in that bag and I faced a lot of problem in getting them, too. I request yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9405531136 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9051922925 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136856096069 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548679338216 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650589378561 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613535439043 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383255766389 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.