Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
when governments decide how to separate annual budget, the interesting question, among the arts and athletics field, emerges and ignites a heated debate. governments should spend more money on which field? the arts or the athletics? Some people tend to choose athletics, but others do not see it in the same. As far as I concerned, using more budget on the support of the arts would be better. There are a number of reasons at play, as I shall discuss below.
The first reason is that there are more people could be involved in the outcome of support of the arts. artworks include performance, such as drama, dance, music concert, movies, paintings, sculptures, installation arts. Most of the artworks could be visited by many visitors and they would not be destroyed. which means almost all people who want to be close to the arts, they can go to museums or theaters to enjoy the world of art.
Second, investment in the arts could also help aesthetics education. aesthetics education is more and more important around the world because the ability of designing and appreciation of arts is not replaced by artificial intelligence. The investment of the arts lets more artists to have chances to perform their abilities, and the masterpieces from them could be the teaching materials for children. In this regards, spending money in the support of the arts is more helpful for education.
Last but not least, spending more money on the arts could improve international perception. when transportation is more convenient, there are more foreign visitors traveling to our country. As the views of the cities are fashionable or creative, travelers would leave a good impression of the country easily. Therefore, the more attractive impression we have, the higher international perception our country would have.
In sum, if we want the budget could be used in the more general area, support of the arts is more close to our goal. it is not only improving civics' aesthetics sense but also growing our international perception up. Accordingly, I would support governments to invest more money on the arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03428571429 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83900097404 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5519425604 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9047619048 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246590810069 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904638924854 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818839394805 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150340024168 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670253124407 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.