Some people say the Olympic Games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?
Olympic games are being played from centuries. Recently, there is a shift in mindset due to which some people believe that Olympic events does not hold any water in 21st century. I do not agree with this statement as it helps people to choose sports as carrier, aid in fuelling economy as well as bring countries together.
To begin with, sports activities are enjoyed by all, but taking it as a profession is a different ball game. An athlete must train very hard and invest in dubious amount of effort to inculcate master required skillset. There are many individuals who can only concentrate while engaged in a physical activity and this attitude helps them in constantly pushing their boundaries in order to excel in their game. Needless to mention, a lot of youngsters get motivated to take sports as a carrier by watching their famous sport person performing. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar and Sushil Kumar has motivated a lot of teenagers to pickup these sport as their goal.
On the other side, international games event like Olympic helps in boosting economy, too. A lot of job opportunities are created across the globe to set the stage for OLYMPIC events. A hosting country engages their best resources to make sure that the event makes history and this thinking helps people of various countries to collaborate and work as a team to make the event a success. These events help’s in bringing countries together and strengthen bonds among them.
To my mind, hosting events like Olympic games in very important in today’s time to provide a platform to strengthen relations among nations. To conclude, these events helps our newer generation to take sports as a carrier and enhancing their talent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'games'' or 'game's'?
Suggestion: games'; game's
... On the other side, international games event like Olympic helps in boosting ec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02430555556 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66231379399 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3731494544 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156269410237 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569623955545 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641405576168 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111842444122 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107822364767 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.