You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Ajay,
I hope you are doing well. It's been a long time haven't heard from you since you moved to London for your higher studies. I needed some advice which only you could help me with. Aunt must have told you about my plans to study M.B.A in the UK and would need guidance on a part-time job As you must know I am not very sound in terms of finances these days.
I have enrolled in M.BA - Marketing at Manchester University and remember you once told me you completed your "Masters in Sales & Marketing" last year. It would be great if you could get me some references for part-time jobs. A job would help me learn things and also help me manage my day-to-day expenses during my stay at the University. Apart from that, you know my dad isn't doing good in his business so considering the scenario I don't want to be a burden on my family.
We have always shared our joys and sorrows. While I was researching the job market, it was just you who came to my mind as we had a great bonding since childhood and been great pals forever. It would really love if you could get me some contacts or suggest some good website to search for jobs I have great expectations from you and you will definitely find something for me before I arrive
Love to hear from you.
Best wishes
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ve told you about my plans to study M.B.A in the UK and would need guidance on a ...
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...rsity. Apart from that, you know my dad isnt doing good in his business so consideri...
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Suggestion: don't
... business so considering the scenario I dont want to be a burden on my family. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly find something for me before I arrive Love to hear from you. Best wishes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, while, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42561983471 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39939678772 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2553852508 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397315936754 0.216113520407 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150691861524 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920830883017 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265217991633 0.12726935374 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768723504988 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.