Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Technology has made numerous changes in our society in various aspects. A significant number of individuals believe that recent development in technology is helping people to have more connectivity. Whereas, others do not agree and believe that it is making a reverse. In this essay, both the aspects will be discussed in following paragraphs followed by personal opinion.
On one side, modern technology has a vital role in making strong bonds between individuals. People are dependent on it to increase their connectivity around the world through various means. For instance, the internet has connected the world and made it like one single village where people can share their things through different websites and express their emotions and ideas publicly with anyone on these platforms. Thus, such inventions are productive and essential in society to have greater connectivity between people around the world.
On the other side, addiction to this advanced technology can create more problems in society such as isolation and stress in life. Spending more time on these platforms affects other activities of a person, especially young children are more vulnerable to these recent technologies because they find more joy with such tools as compared with talking face to face with individuals. Hence, addiction to such creative gifts from science can create a mental barrier for affected individuals. As a result, many individuals find modern technology is making people less sociable.
In conclusion, while excessive use of technology can create disturbance in society between individuals, I believe that certain restrictions and guidelines can create more awareness between individuals. In other words, the optimum use of technology is more beneficial for society to have strong social communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58844765343 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91219629809 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8593749546 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238970322633 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913851260422 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082278483263 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140150155006 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442463000057 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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