You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:
- where you went
- what you saw there
- how you felt about it
Dear Sam,
Hello, I am Cindy. I hope this letter finds you well. These days, I visited animal taxidermy museum, that museum was very interested. If we visited together, it would be fun and would make excited memory to us.
As you know, I love to see various animals because, I can feel I was explored in the jungle. And there was living in the tree, water and land animals, especially, the crocodile was really huge also, there has specific specious kind of animals too. That museum located in downtown Vancouver, it takes 30minuate from my home. I think you will visit Vancouver 2 weeks later, right? It cost is pretty cheap! It is just 10dollers per person. Most of the staff was staying the entrance, they gather people and give the tickets. Inside the museum was quiet and clean, most of the customers were visitors and local people. Furthermore, I know a delicious cuisine restaurant near the museum. I wish you love that restaurant too.
I hope to see you soon.
Your sincerely,
Cindy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hello, I am Cindy. I hope this letter fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, well, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81714285714 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43079562015 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9763551655 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.2 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228016892707 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783799689221 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759059667522 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167463451521 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200949816957 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.49 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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